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There is something wrong with the kids in my neighbor hood
There is a sickness rising in the people of the nation
Forget the bird flu
This pandemic has been rising since human creation
Becuase it is us
We all are the appex of hate, descrimination
The peak of closemindedness and fear
Where our politics are corrupt
Our streets flooded with whores and drugs
Our media packed to the brim with sex
There is something wrong...
Or maybe it is just me
But I do not see what is so funny about love and peace
I don't see why I am so ridiculous for being the one
Being the one with the open mind
Being the one not gay bashing
not drinking
not smoking
Not being the disease
We are past sick
We are dead...
Karma is a funny thing
©2005-2009 ~Metal-bass-player
:iconmetal-bass-player:

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:iconitaliancarne:
very well structured and expressed. i agree with some things you said and others I don't O_o but it's a good piece of writing. keep the good work up *thumbs up*

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"I can't be near you, the light just radiates"
:iconflyspider:
can I have sex with you for that one? No wait....

Sir, that touched on such a level, I can't express it. Not even tears would suit it. We need to have more philosophical(SP) conversations, for sure. Lord, that is so good.

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[Insert witty signature]
:iconezzen16:
'Karma is a funny thing '
Very powerfull way to finish!
nicely done

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Luv ya, take care
ERin
:iconcoheed7503:
Like the poem a heck of a lot. Lots of strong feelings and true happenings. Enjoyed it

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